Monday, 5 December 2011

My Argumentative Writing


IS KILLING RIGHT OR NOT?

I am arguing that killing is right.

Firstly, my first argument is self-defence killing because would you want a person pointing a gun at your head while you’re doing nothing. Everyone should have the courage to protect yourself in any way even if you have to shoot that person. My second argument is about killing in combat.

Secondly, in war, every soldier understand and they have to accept that they are going to be standing in front of an enemy and shoot them no matter how you feel because you are forced and you wanted to join the army. They are your enemy, it is to kill or be killed. My next argument is mercy killing.

In addition, killing is right if a family decides to end the life of their loved ones that has a particular life problem so that they can end their misery. They are allowed to end their life because it is their body, they can do whatever they want to with it. If they do not want to or cannot commit suicide by killing themselves, they can also call an assistant suicide helper that is a doctor so you the person who wants die do not need to jump off a building or hang themselves. Instead of that, we can also ask the doctor to just kill them in an easier way. But, in some countries this is not allowed, like Malaysia because it against the law. My next argument is death penalty.

On the other hand, death penalty is when a criminal is charged in court and is sentenced to death. This killing is right because they have killed someone and that means that they took someone’s life and that person also may have a family, children, all their loved ones. And the killer might be killing that person for fun. So they should be punished because of what they have done to that person’s life. This would also show to all the killers out there that has not been captured will be sentenced to death as well so that they will stop killing or kidnapping or doing things that they should not be doing.

Some people may argue that killing is wrong not only because it is wrong in the eyes of the law, but also in every religion killing another human is a sin. But somehow, killing is right such as the death penalty where a criminal is prosecuted when that person has committed a crime such as by killing a person. Besides that, in some religion such as in Islam and Christianity killing is right if it is done to protect the religion when they are in danger.

Finally, from all the arguments that I have pointed out, people might still think that killing is wrong if someone kills someone for anger and different types of killing that are wrong. But I still think that my opinion is right because of all the point I have given.

In my Argumentative writing, I have changed my conclusion several times because it the hardest paragraph for me because we have to sum up all the points you have made and make it into a paragraph.

What I leaned on thursday's lesson was that you can improve your writing by looking at other people's work and what they wrote on my sheet, what I need to improve on.  :)



Sunday, 4 December 2011

Homework?

Where is your argumentative piece?

Wednesday, 9 November 2011

Wishes for Presentation.

- I need to organise my presentation and.
- I should make my presentation longer.
- Explain more about the meaning of the song and how successful was it.

My Poetry.

My topic will be about war, and it will be about kids not about adults or soldiers, how kids they suffer with their lives.

Monday, 17 October 2011

Film Review.

Success Criteria.

1. I can write in a simple way so that the reader can understand what I am writing about.
2. I can put my information into paragraph.

1. I can use symbols like, (, . : ' " ! ? )
2.

Monday, 10 October 2011

NEVER GIVE UP.

Aaron Ralston who was from a big city decides to go to Blue John Canyon, in Canyon Land National Park and he meets 2 wonderful ladies that were lost. so, he shows them the way. after all the they had, Aaron says goodbye and starts his journey alone to the Blue John Canyon.

After walking for hours, his hand got stuck and it showed how he had to survive with his hand stuck for 6 days. he did videos of himself of what he does every single day and it gets really sad at the end.

The shots of the film are really good, for example the part where the part was overflowing and at the part where his hand got stuck. He didn't have any water left and they showed the shot inside the bottle and it shows how much he needed water.

I also like the part where he was just so excited it makes me go excited watching the movie. he is such a bubbly kind of character that keeps me want to watch this movie until the end. the music was so touching and inspiring it makes you wanna cry.

I really didn't like the part Aaron and the girls jumped down this hole because it just scares me and you really don't know what is actually down there, it might be a rock, skulls it can be anything.

 And also the part where his hand was stuck. that just scares me as well because like my answer before it was really scary and you don't know what it going to happen next.

I really like James Franco in the movie 127 hours because he is such great actor he 's so good at acting bubbly and not worried at anything and there is a part where he is serious and suddenly he's bubbly again, I love the way he acts.. I also like those 2 girls that he met along the road, but they were just normal actors not that good though except for the part they screamed really loud.

This film has really brought me up. After I watched this movie whatever I do nowadays, I never gave up. And that is the moral of this movie, Do not be afraid, never give up in life you never know you might succeed in your life in the future.

BYE BYE.

Sunday, 25 September 2011

The learning journal.

What are key compentencies?
Key compentencies means are goals that can help them and guide them to a sucess life. In school, and outside of school.

In each of the classrooms there are displayed pictures of key compentencies that will remind the students in class before they learn.